Radianai-a story of salvation
Radianai is a story (or saga, if you like) written by me. It takes place in a world called Ahtria. It's divided into seven parts. The titles are as follows:
Radianai: 7-Part Saga
- Part 1: Separation
- Part 2: Covenant
- Part 3: Sacrifice
- Part 4: Eradication
- Part 5: Eruption
- Part 6: Survival
- Part 7: Rebirth
8/11/99-
Radianai: Background
What exactly is Radianai? It's not just another fantasy tale; Radianai is two things; the name of my allegorical tale of-you guessed it, good and evil, and the name of the Saviour of the story. The basic plot is this: Ahtria was once a peaceful world of Trians united in their love for their Creator, Triominah, and dwelling together with Sharrimh, angelic beings of service to Triominah. Known as the Blessed Days, near the end cloaked and secretive strangers calling themselves the Messengers began to be seen. Some recognized the danger but failed to act strongly enough, while most fell for their promising lies of power, might, and freedom by rejecting Triominah and joining their Kingdom of Shargon, their leader. On one night, the Rebellion occured. The Sharrimh fled and the Messengers gained control, giving rulership and magic to the Trians who joined most wholeheartedly, called the Xorsinh. Those who still served Triominah were killed. Shargon, their mysterious and unseen leader now had control, and as the Messengers returned to whence they came, the Xorsinh installed a type of martial law over Ahtria, letting the Trians rule locally but overseeing all that went on. Utarekh, the Chancellor, was their leader and ruled from Kherothia, the Xorsinh kingdom in western Arya, the western land mass, seperated from Naia, the eastern land, by the huge Ahtrian Sea. This Sea was a result of the worst effect of the Rebellion; the land of Ahtria split into two (Arya and Naia) by a huge seismic Cataclysm caused by the destructive powers of Shargon and the Messengers, with the Sea seperating them.
Thus, as a result of the Cataclysm, Trians themselves became isolated and independant, becoming quite unlike their joyful and peaceful selves for the most part, struggling under Kherothian rule: the noble but foolish Aryens (Arya), the dark and pagan Naians , divided into several clans (Naia), the ancient and mysterious reptilian Qinhs (Qinvas, an island of the southern coast of Naia), the savage Chaian pirates of the La-Chai Islands, and the fierce and pious nomad rebel Suvans, on whom Part 1 centers on.
But, Triominah saw all that had occured, and was determined to make things right.
Radainai: Seperation
8/20/99-Chapter 1 is finished, the fourth draft being the most satisfactory. A small excerpt is as follows:
"Sufa Palura advanced silently in the shadows. Fear pounded against him like a hammer. The looming buildings and towers of Entarrah gave him cover, but though unnoticeable in the narrow streets amidst the crowds, still the thought of being found remained. For Sufa was a wanted man, sought after for doing nothing wrong."
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