Fantasy Trip Written by

Lauren Ilyse Edwards
September 15,1982 - November 20, 1998


on September 28,1998 for her English class.



I. A great adventure
A. To travel across the country would be an adventure
B. I would enjoy the many sights, entertainment, and different lifestyles in California
C. I would include a day behind the scenes of a movie production followed by a day at Disneyland with Ben Affleck
III. Travel companions
A. Nicole is twenty years old and loves Ben Affleck
B. She would be able to drive us around and she can write checks or use her credit cards!
C. Cary would be a good choice because we have a lot of the same interests.
IV. Different accommodations
A. I would like my fantasy trip to include the fast pace of the city
B. I have only heard about Los Angeles and Beverly Hills
C. The bright lights and crowded streets would be a change
D. I would love the excitement of walking on the same streets that famous people like Madonna, Matt Damon, and Tom Cruise walked on
E. Also love to spend time near the ocean
F. It would be so relaxing to look out my window and see the blue waves roll gently to the shore
G. The sound of the ocean would help me sleep after a busy day
V. Activities planned
A. Shop on Rodeo Drive and look around for famous people
B. Visit television studios like MTV and watch game shows and sit-coms
C. Once I spent time on a movie set, I would take off with Ben Affleck, Nicole, and Cary, and head for Disneyland
D. At Disneyland I would ride every ride and visit every exhibit
E. The park will be twice as fun with Ben Affleck in our group
F. Will need a few days by the ocean to relax and remember what a fun time we had.
VI. Possibility of trip
A. Fantasy trip would be a dream come true
B. Cannot be achieved by hard work or ambition
C. Hopefully a contest with day in Disneyland with Ben Affleck as the prize
D. Otherwise, I'll adjust my fantasy trip to one that can be more easily reached
E. For the time being I'll have to settle for a night with a couple of friends and a video!



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