Sounds of a Bronze World Part I

a Halloween fiction special from The Flor-Ala

first ran: 10/21/99

(Note: The first part of this two-part fiction series is not very good. The second part, however, was a much stronger offering, so if you're up for reading the entire story, it might be a good idea to skim part one and go on to part two.)

    There was a man who lived down the block from me when I was a kid. He might have been thirty or he might have been ninety--in childhood, anyone over ten seems ancient to you--but he stooped, he dressed in black, he sighed whenever I saw him.
    At night, in summer when I slept with my windows open, I could hear him weeping loudly and bitterly, and in the daytime he would sit on his front porch, staring blankly at the emptiness of our dull residential street. When he sobbed at night he sounded like wolves and like water draining from a bathtub; as he sat on his porch in the daytime he looked like a ghost. Actually--since Mom was during this time reading Victorian ghost stories to me--he looked "spectral." He looked like a spectre from Dickens.
    Occasionally, I would speak to him as I passed by on my bike. "Good morning, Mr. Mirton!" I chimed often. "How are you?" I would do a lazy loop in front of his house, waiting for a reply. He never gave me a reply. Just an unfocused stare.
    If I were in an obstinate mood I sometimes continued looping lazily around and around in order to carry on a one-sided conversation. "Nice day, isn't it, Mr. Mirton! Wow, look at that sky!... Days like these make you want to kick back with a beer and just sit by a pool!... You like beer?... pools...?" And so on, a perfect imitation of my father when he was trying to get someone new to like him.

    Jay Allison, one of the few boys anywhere near my age living on the same street, developed a more subtle tactic for getting Mr. Mirton's attention. Jay threw things at him. On an evening in July, while the sun lingered for hours on the brink of death, Jay and I stood at the curb of Mr. Mirton's yard and tossed--first softly and then firmly and then desperately--an assortment of items we had gathered for the purpose. Appendages of slaughtered action figures, Jay's sister's dolls and tea set, buttons, pins, pens, notebooks, ice cubes, stones, bits of wood, a package of frozen peas, and old game cartridges. We struck Mr. Mirton more than once and made a hell of a racket but nothing moved him. He remained inert, distant, detached, dead. Mr. Mirton got a black eye from an ice cube and a bloody nose from the frozen peas but he did not even wince.
    That night, however, as I lay in bed listening to the sobs like wolves and draining water, I noticed a new sound. Usually there were the crickets chirping, and our dog barking, and the odd car or truck engine, and the voices of teenagers walking from house to house in addition to the cries. Not much else. Some variation but always identifiable sounds. On the night after Jay Allison and I attacked him, though, mixed in with the sobbing I detected a more menacing sound I could not name. Unsteady creakings, metal against metal, the sounds of a bronze world being split by an earthquake. The sobs began, as they usually did, around ten or eleven, and, as always, lasted until daybreak, but the new sounds started an hour later and lasted until just after midnight.
    It scared me. I thought of the stories Mother read to me in the day time--about spectres seeking revenge, mostly, and a terrible possibility crossed my mind: Mr. Mirton looked like a ghost because he was a ghost, and now Jay and I had wounded him. What if he would now seek his revenge, and what if the terrible new sound had something to do with his vengeance? To my mind, seeking revenge was the only purpose of being a ghost. Quite possibly, Mr. Mirton had spent years sitting on his front porch waiting for someone to do something to him o he might have cause to get back at them. He wept all night because he had not exacted a wrathful vengeance on anyone, Until now, he had not found anyone to revenge himself upon.
    I did not sleep that night. As soon as my parents began getting dressed for work, I went downstairs to eat a bowl of cereal, then stepped outside to feed my dog, Bosch. Though still summer, the morning was cool, with a heavy dew on the ground. The grass stuck to my bare feet as I crossed the backyard toward the fat oak tree where we kept the dog chained. Bosch, a collie, began leaping and dancing as soon as he saw me bearing his breakfast in a metal dish.
    Because of my lack of sleep, my mind was not as alert as it needed to be. I placed the food in front of Bosch, who took no interest in it. He was not happy, it turned out, because of his breakfast but because I had come to see him so early in the day. I kneeled down to pet him, the dewy grass soaking my thin pajamas at the knees and Bosch's we tongue soaking my face. As he nuzzled into me, I giggled and pushed him back.
    It was then that I noticed the blood. His mouth was a crimson red, his paws stained even darker with blood and mud. My own hands, from where I had touched him, were smeared a deep maroon. At first I thought he had managed to coax a cat too close to him, or perhaps a squirrel. Then I saw, in the entrance to his doghouse beside the tree, the blank and detached stare of Jay Allison's head, lopsided, resting on one cheek.

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